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The first activities-to-do/products-to-hand-in that count as parts of your
course grade are described below. This is Part 1 of Assignment 1.
Assignment 1 has two further parts and they are described in Steps 3 and 4.
An Example of an Evolving Topic Sentence -
First draft:
What are the variables involved here?
Part 1, Stage 2 - In order to provide you with feedback on your first draft, you have the opportunity to seek feedback from the class. You will email your first draft to the class and your instructor, and two of your classmates (and I) will reply to your message with a helpful and informative critique. Note a helpful critique is both encouraging and provides specific suggestions for improvement. You will only be assigned full credit for doing this part of the assignment if you 1) send out your draft, 2) critique the drafts of two of your colleagues (Copy your emails to me so I'll know you responded), and 3) if all the components are completed prior to the due date listed in the Schedule. Because the purpose of this dialog is to help one another, you cannot do this late. No credit will be earned if you participate in the email discussion after the due date in the Schedule. Part 1, Stage 3 - You need to email your final topic sentence to Rodger Marion on, or before, the date specified in the Schedule in the course menu. The grading criteria is in Step 4.
Step 2 - Research Topic Sentence
What are the newest alternatives in hand rehabilitation therapy after carpal tunnel release surgery?
Analysis and Reflection:
Independent Variable - methods used in hand rehabilitation after carpal tunnel release surgery (Note - This is one variable - methods - of which there are several methods).
Dependent
Variables - cost and time to full recovery. Two dependent variables are named here.
Second Draft:
Which method for hand rehabilitation after carpal tunnel release surgery results in lower costs and faster patient recovery?
The feedback will enable you to revise your draft into an acceptable topic sentence. Complete the tasks of Stage 2 before doing Stage 3.